This is a piece I write for introduction in instablurb. It is a great website for prompts and comments. Still neonate, little traffic, not much update, it is rough unpolished gem. Great place to expose writer to fellow writer and to avid reader. Reviewers? Not yet. It started in tumblr and now they brave themselves to become a fully functioning website. Semi-forum style. Check this out and check the website out.
INTRO
Most of them wrung their hands and with difficulty, twisted the handle of the door. The pressure of escaped air almost pushed them back out. Each one of them had been watching everyone entered one by one, impatience mixed with nerve stirred their legs. Some created irregular noises, some hypnotic albeit annoying rhythm. She never felt ready to jump into the line, since it almost always went on without sightings of its end.
INTRO
Most of them wrung their hands and with difficulty, twisted the handle of the door. The pressure of escaped air almost pushed them back out. Each one of them had been watching everyone entered one by one, impatience mixed with nerve stirred their legs. Some created irregular noises, some hypnotic albeit annoying rhythm. She never felt ready to jump into the line, since it almost always went on without sightings of its end.